You need to make clear whose presentation is whose. Maybe add a sub-heading before each one? Some of these need more development, especially the last one, which actually only makes a point about clothing that is relevant to brand image. You may want to offer more analysis of the media language that creates the brand image and what connotations these have for the audience. You could also identify the ideologies linked to each artists an consider how these appeal to his/ her audience...
You need to make clear whose presentation is whose. Maybe add a sub-heading before each one? Some of these need more development, especially the last one, which actually only makes a point about clothing that is relevant to brand image. You may want to offer more analysis of the media language that creates the brand image and what connotations these have for the audience. You could also identify the ideologies linked to each artists an consider how these appeal to his/ her audience...
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